9/14/12

Price Newell

Texas State is preparing to help its students stay healthy during the upcoming flu season. Price Newell has more in this Bobcat Update.


Colder weather is approaching, which means students will be spending more time indoors. When that happens, the chances of coming down with a cold or flu increase. Many students and faculty recognize the need for prevention if they want to stay healthy.
SB 1 (Student)
Flu vaccinations are offered at several locations in San Marcos, but some students doubt whether the vaccine is effective..
SB 2 (Karen Gordon-Sosby)
Student Health Center officials say Texas State students will have access to a new type of flu vaccine beginning in October.
SB3 (Karen Gordon-Sosby)
Other preventative measures that students can take to stay healthy are to wash their hands regularly, cover their mouths when coughing and get plenty of sleep. For Bobcat Update, I'm Price Newell.  
Please don't write SLUG on your copy. Just type the script.
Texas State is an entity, a body, an institution -- It is singular. Pronouns referring to it should be singular. You used "their."
You made students possessive when you inserted an apostrophe. The word is not possessive in this case.
You're better off sticking to a basic Subject-Verb-Object structure. You tend to use too many introductory phrases and clauses.

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